Polysyndeton (pol-y-syn’-de-ton): Employing many conjunctions between clauses, often slowing the tempo or rhythm. (Asyndeton is the opposite of polysyndeton: an absence of conjunctions.)
There were rainy days, and happy days, and the yacht trolling the Gulf Stream reeling in bonita, and rum-soaked nights on Bimini at my favorite bar in the world. I had left my wife and kids years and years ago. It was winter in Maine. I hitched to Portland, caught a train, and off I went to Florida. My family woke up and I was gone. Gone to the good life without them. I felt no remorse or guilt or shame.
I was hired as a Marina Manager in Miami and enjoyed being around the water. However, I had significant experience as a skipper and kept my eyes open. My family had a shipyard in Maine. I was born to the water, maybe on the water. My chance came when the skipper of The Black Crow had a reprise of malaria and couldn’t get out of bed. My boss recommended me to fill in. The Black Crow was painted all black with teak decks and brass fittings. It was beautiful; almost as beautiful as the owner’s wife Sandy. Whenever I got close to her, I could smell the coconut oil she used as a sun block. The owner, Mr. Blag, couldn’t make the trip. He had to show their dog Renee at a show in Orlando. It was a Beagle.
I still didn’t know where we were going when I fired up the Black Crow. I knew only Sandy and I were gong out. As we pulled out of the marina she gave me the coordinates of where we were going. When I overlaid them on the map, I saw our destination was a mile off Bimini. Sandy said, “When we get close, start looking for floating boxes.” When we got close, we saw a broken down yacht with two men hauling boxes aboard. Sandy went below and came up with two machine guns—AR 15s. She told me to go in fast, “You know what to do.” She handed me a gun.
We emptied our clips on the usurpers and hauled in the boxes. We boarded their broken down boat and discovered they were Cuban.
Heading back to Miami Sandy came up behind me, hugged me and kissed my neck. She said softly, “You’re a killer now.“ I didn’t know what to do. She was the only one who knew and God only knew what was in the boxes. I set the boat on auto pilot. I took Sandy’s hand and we walked to the stern. I pushed her overboard and left her screaming. I pried open one of the boxes and looked inside. It was packed with bundles of $100 bills.
The Black Crow had a Boston Whaler as a sort of life boat, but more as a utility boat to go exploring. I threw three boxes into her and lowered her into the water. I lit the Black Crow on fire and headed for Bimini, where I had a friend who would get me hidden out.
Definition courtesy of “Silva Rhetoricae” (rhetoric.byu.edu)
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